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Re: Dance of the Flamingo_Story by Sanku
Sanku maharaj is in tank dhaga.
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Sanku-ji,
You never said it would be "one post a week-day".. no fair !!
You never said it would be "one post a week-day".. no fair !!
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Sorry folks, I exhausted the buffer, and didn't get a chance to type up more this week. I had actually been running on stuff written as far as last weekend. I still dont have anything typed up. I will however try and make a post by EOD today and resume the flow. This time no weekend breaks too.
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Excellent!!!
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Capital Sanku Capital... keep it going... one of the best that i read in a long time..
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Time for Mr Manav to come out from Liliya Nest Sanku Next Post plzzzzzzz
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Not to derail the thread but there is a pro-India lobby in Eastern European states (atleast in Sanku ji's plot) which provides a breath of fresh air from the stranglehold of the Russian defence lobbies in India's defence market (which is the reality today).
I am just waiting to see with bated breath whether the story will evolve to a point wherein we see India playing Russian sensibilities against Ukraine and possibly other CIS nations.
Sanku ji: Hope you do not mind a few more suggestions (unless you have more or less fixed up the intended course for the story)? We would like to see a possible angle with Turkish players involved (could be either hostile or thrid party players).
Also, based on the backdrop of the recent ouster of Kyrgyztan's president and resulting political turmoil, you could introduce a twist in the tale in the form of a "fork in the road" for the Russians/Western players, something that would be game changing for desh.
Great going Sanku ji!
I am just waiting to see with bated breath whether the story will evolve to a point wherein we see India playing Russian sensibilities against Ukraine and possibly other CIS nations.
Sanku ji: Hope you do not mind a few more suggestions (unless you have more or less fixed up the intended course for the story)? We would like to see a possible angle with Turkish players involved (could be either hostile or thrid party players).
Also, based on the backdrop of the recent ouster of Kyrgyztan's president and resulting political turmoil, you could introduce a twist in the tale in the form of a "fork in the road" for the Russians/Western players, something that would be game changing for desh.
Great going Sanku ji!
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Thanks Klaus and others, suggestions are always welcome, and as/is any feedback adverse or positive. I have tried/will try to roll in all suggestions, although they may end up coming out than as perhaps the original contributor intended.
I understand that I have been remiss in keeping the story flowing, due to some bits and bumps here and there, including some tank battles.
Let me try and make amends shortly.
I understand that I have been remiss in keeping the story flowing, due to some bits and bumps here and there, including some tank battles.
Let me try and make amends shortly.
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Perhaps the TankDhaaga can be locked everyday for 3 hours to give you some break for the "Flamingo Dance".Sanku wrote:I understand that I have been remiss in keeping the story flowing, due to some bits and bumps here and there, including some tank battles.
Let me try and make amends shortly.
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Sanku and Dileep please visit the best seller thread in GDF and see how others are taking things forward.
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Sankuji ney Manav koo Natasha kee gode mey sula diya tao uthney kaa naam he nahi lay raha.
He’s been sleeping for more than a week now.
He’s been sleeping for more than a week now.
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This is a Threat
Sanku, if you don't restart this story within THREE days, I am going to start the next one.
Sanku, if you don't restart this story within THREE days, I am going to start the next one.
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today is 10, hence 3 days from today will be 13, absolutely inauspicious number to start a project,Dileep wrote:This is a Threat
Sanku, if you don't restart this story within THREE days, I am going to start the next one.
10 is very Auspicious, why not today.
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Does our netas look at the calendar when issuing the 'final ultimatum' to pakis?
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atone for your sins of keeping us waiting by making another post today. and I promise I'll ban you outright if I catch you posting in tank dhaga today !
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Hmm, that bluff worked!! thanx!!
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Dileep chetta, just because sanku garu has posted, doesn't mean you shouldn't start... awaiting the squeal to spy story 2...
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Dada yeh dil maange more.
Hoping against hope for another segment tomorrow.
Hoping against hope for another segment tomorrow.
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Two segments are in buffer, so two installments are defi there. They will also be of a nature of *hot* interlude.Mukesh.Kumar wrote:Dada yeh dil maange more.
Hoping against hope for another segment tomorrow.
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Great Dada.
Eagerly awaiting Indra's return from behind the clouds.
Eagerly awaiting Indra's return from behind the clouds.
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Wow, I hope the next story you write, would be a war scenario! Takes the already awesome story to a new level!
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that was s@xy man !!!!!
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What a great story... Sanku Ji tussi "double" great ho..
I started reading the Dance .. only today and I have finished it ... I simply could not take a break..
What narration, ultimate story line and build up. Wish I could clone you multiple times ...
I started reading the Dance .. only today and I have finished it ... I simply could not take a break..
What narration, ultimate story line and build up. Wish I could clone you multiple times ...
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Monday evening:
[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b88D6z9N3eg[/youtube]
^^ Requesting the next installment !!!
[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b88D6z9N3eg[/youtube]
^^ Requesting the next installment !!!
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Just amazing Sanku sir... Your use of words and Vocab is superb... Keep it coming... This post is acting as my Vodka Dose for sureManav stared at the list bleary eyed, not sure if it was the Vodka combined with the tiredness that was making him hallucinate
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Amazing write up. Suspense is really killing. At least keep to your promise of one post a day. Also ankus lagao tank dhaaga pe.Sanku wrote:Dance of the flamingo -- Post 33
“List of additional entities recommended by the joint subcommittee on Promotion of Private Partnership in Defence Production, under the aegis of Defence Secretary and co chaired by Asst Secretary of Ministry of Commerce”
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Minor nitpicking
make Asst Secretary as Additional Secretary. There is no Asst. Secy in GOI. If any one, he would be such a minor official not to co-chair anything with DEFENCE SECRETARY.
USA or UK setup is different. There it could make sense.
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You are right, an inadvertent error in the flow of writing. However I cant edit that post any more, could a Mod please help edit it?chaanakya wrote:
Minor nitpicking
make Asst Secretary as Additional Secretary. There is no Asst. Secy in GOI. If any one, he would be such a minor official not to co-chair anything with DEFENCE SECRETARY.
USA or UK setup is different. There it could make sense.
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Dada,
Weekend over and no more installments.
Ye Liliya ka chakkar bahut gadbad hai. Every time she appears on the scene our Manav disappears for a long time.
Weekend over and no more installments.
Ye Liliya ka chakkar bahut gadbad hai. Every time she appears on the scene our Manav disappears for a long time.
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That is an intriguing twist. Why the Finns? Is all of this a further subterfuge from the Russians? Now I won't be able to sleep properly thinking about which way the next torn is going to be in.
Eagerly awaiting next installment. Only this time I am scared that "Lily ke chakkar mein Manav fir se choo-mantar ho jayega" for a very long time.
Eagerly awaiting next installment. Only this time I am scared that "Lily ke chakkar mein Manav fir se choo-mantar ho jayega" for a very long time.
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Err no, the puppet master behind the Finns are mentioned already! I think there there is no further twist per se... most of the twists are done...
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Sanku sir, enough of the sabbatical due to the death of pandeyji, may his soul rest in peace...
could we get the next post please...
could we get the next post please...
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After Americans; we have a Paki angle... Kahani mai Twist nahi twistsssss hai... You just make the suspense and put our guessing power to new limits Sanku Sir... Enjoying every bit of it...
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Couple of episodes back t seemed that the story was running to a rather tame and predictable end. But this.....
Extremely intrigued about Manav's past history. Why is everyone so interested.
Extremely intrigued about Manav's past history. Why is everyone so interested.
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Long overdue for the next post.
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Mods,
Please issue a fatwa against sankuji and get him post again.
Please issue a fatwa against sankuji and get him post again.
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Dada, where art thou?
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Writing, in the background, getting a critical mass of the story to restart posting. Sorry for the delay, but sometimes stories take life and speeds of their own.
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No problem dada. I just took a week's enforced (and extremely difficult break from BR) hoping that I would come back to at veritable feast.
Good things in life are worth waiting for.
Good things in life are worth waiting for.
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A true writer spoke.Sanku wrote:Writing, in the background, getting a critical mass of the story to restart posting. Sorry for the delay, but sometimes stories take life and speeds of their own.
Well said indeed.
Sanku, please take your time, but do take pity on us poor chaps, facing withdrawal symptoms.Same goes for other worthy writers.
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hats Off Sankuji.....Its read dope.
Story taking very interesting turn....
But please...please keep enough supply, I can't handle withdrawl symptom.
Story taking very interesting turn....
But please...please keep enough supply, I can't handle withdrawl symptom.