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Re: Dance of the Flamingo_Story by Sanku

Postby negi » 25 Apr 2010 19:49

Sanku maharaj is in tank dhaga. :twisted:

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Re: Dance of the Flamingo_Story by Sanku

Postby a_kumar » 25 Apr 2010 22:25

Sanku-ji,

You never said it would be "one post a week-day".. no fair :( !!

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Re: Dance of the Flamingo_Story by Sanku

Postby Sanku » 26 Apr 2010 09:06

Sorry folks, I exhausted the buffer, and didn't get a chance to type up more this week. I had actually been running on stuff written as far as last weekend. I still dont have anything typed up. :( I will however try and make a post by EOD today and resume the flow. This time no weekend breaks too.

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Re: Dance of the Flamingo_Story by Sanku

Postby Manish_Sharma » 29 Apr 2010 01:10

Excellent!!!

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Re: Dance of the Flamingo_Story by Sanku

Postby nitinr » 01 May 2010 15:36

Capital Sanku Capital... keep it going... one of the best that i read in a long time..

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Re: Dance of the Flamingo_Story by Sanku

Postby nits » 01 May 2010 23:06

Time for Mr Manav to come out from Liliya Nest :lol: Sanku Next Post plzzzzzzz :(

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Re: Dance of the Flamingo_Story by Sanku

Postby Klaus » 04 May 2010 15:41

Not to derail the thread but there is a pro-India lobby in Eastern European states (atleast in Sanku ji's plot) which provides a breath of fresh air from the stranglehold of the Russian defence lobbies in India's defence market (which is the reality today).

I am just waiting to see with bated breath whether the story will evolve to a point wherein we see India playing Russian sensibilities against Ukraine and possibly other CIS nations.

Sanku ji: Hope you do not mind a few more suggestions (unless you have more or less fixed up the intended course for the story)? We would like to see a possible angle with Turkish players involved (could be either hostile or thrid party players).

Also, based on the backdrop of the recent ouster of Kyrgyztan's president and resulting political turmoil, you could introduce a twist in the tale in the form of a "fork in the road" for the Russians/Western players, something that would be game changing for desh.

Great going Sanku ji!

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Re: Dance of the Flamingo_Story by Sanku

Postby Sanku » 04 May 2010 15:53

Thanks Klaus and others, suggestions are always welcome, and as/is any feedback adverse or positive. I have tried/will try to roll in all suggestions, although they may end up coming out than as perhaps the original contributor intended.

I understand that I have been remiss in keeping the story flowing, due to some bits and bumps here and there, including some tank battles.

Let me try and make amends shortly.

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Re: Dance of the Flamingo_Story by Sanku

Postby Manish_Sharma » 06 May 2010 09:21

Sanku wrote:I understand that I have been remiss in keeping the story flowing, due to some bits and bumps here and there, including some tank battles.
Let me try and make amends shortly.


Perhaps the TankDhaaga can be locked everyday for 3 hours to give you some break for the "Flamingo Dance". :D

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Re: Dance of the Flamingo_Story by Sanku

Postby ramana » 06 May 2010 22:54

Sanku and Dileep please visit the best seller thread in GDF and see how others are taking things forward.

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Re: Dance of the Flamingo_Story by Sanku

Postby BajKhedawal » 07 May 2010 21:11

Sankuji ney Manav koo Natasha kee gode mey sula diya tao uthney kaa naam he nahi lay raha. :eek:

He’s been sleeping for more than a week now.

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Re: Dance of the Flamingo_Story by Sanku

Postby Dileep » 10 May 2010 08:00

This is a Threat
Sanku, if you don't restart this story within THREE days, I am going to start the next one.

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Re: Dance of the Flamingo_Story by Sanku

Postby niran » 10 May 2010 09:31

Dileep wrote:This is a Threat
Sanku, if you don't restart this story within THREE days, I am going to start the next one.

today is 10, hence 3 days from today will be 13, absolutely inauspicious number to start a project,
10 is very Auspicious, why not today.

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Re: Dance of the Flamingo_Story by Sanku

Postby Dileep » 10 May 2010 10:19

Does our netas look at the calendar when issuing the 'final ultimatum' to pakis?

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Re: Dance of the Flamingo_Story by Sanku

Postby Rahul M » 10 May 2010 19:07

atone for your sins of keeping us waiting by making another post today. and I promise I'll ban you outright if I catch you posting in tank dhaga today ! :P

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Re: Dance of the Flamingo_Story by Sanku

Postby Dileep » 10 May 2010 20:37

Hmm, that bluff worked!! thanx!!

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Re: Dance of the Flamingo_Story by Sanku

Postby Bala Vignesh » 10 May 2010 23:03

Dileep chetta, just because sanku garu has posted, doesn't mean you shouldn't start... awaiting the squeal to spy story 2...

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Re: Dance of the Flamingo_Story by Sanku

Postby Mukesh.Kumar » 11 May 2010 16:27

Dada yeh dil maange more.

Hoping against hope for another segment tomorrow.

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Re: Dance of the Flamingo_Story by Sanku

Postby Sanku » 11 May 2010 16:33

Mukesh.Kumar wrote:Dada yeh dil maange more.

Hoping against hope for another segment tomorrow.


Two segments are in buffer, so two installments are defi there. They will also be of a nature of *hot* interlude.

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Re: Dance of the Flamingo_Story by Sanku

Postby Mukesh.Kumar » 13 May 2010 15:18

Great Dada.

Eagerly awaiting Indra's return from behind the clouds.

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Re: Dance of the Flamingo_Story by Sanku

Postby Manish_Sharma » 13 May 2010 16:56

Wow, I hope the next story you write, would be a war scenario! Takes the already awesome story to a new level!

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Re: Dance of the Flamingo_Story by Sanku

Postby Mihir.D » 13 May 2010 22:46

that was s@xy man !!!!!

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Re: Dance of the Flamingo_Story by Sanku

Postby ksmahesh » 13 May 2010 23:08

What a great story... Sanku Ji tussi "double" great ho..

I started reading the Dance .. only today and I have finished it ... I simply could not take a break..

What narration, ultimate story line and build up. Wish I could clone you multiple times :) ...

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Re: Dance of the Flamingo_Story by Sanku

Postby Manish_Sharma » 17 May 2010 17:54

Monday evening:
[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b88D6z9N3eg[/youtube]
^^ Requesting the next installment !!! :)

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Re: Dance of the Flamingo_Story by Sanku

Postby nits » 20 May 2010 15:40

Manav stared at the list bleary eyed, not sure if it was the Vodka combined with the tiredness that was making him hallucinate


Just amazing Sanku sir... Your use of words and Vocab is superb... Keep it coming... This post is acting as my Vodka Dose for sure :)

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Re: Dance of the Flamingo_Story by Sanku

Postby chaanakya » 20 May 2010 18:43

Sanku wrote:Dance of the flamingo -- Post 33


“List of additional entities recommended by the joint subcommittee on Promotion of Private Partnership in Defence Production, under the aegis of Defence Secretary and co chaired by Asst Secretary of Ministry of Commerce”

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Amazing write up. Suspense is really killing. At least keep to your promise of one post a day. Also ankus lagao tank dhaaga pe.

Minor nitpicking

make Asst Secretary as Additional Secretary. There is no Asst. Secy in GOI. If any one, he would be such a minor official not to co-chair anything with DEFENCE SECRETARY.

USA or UK setup is different. There it could make sense.

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Re: Dance of the Flamingo_Story by Sanku

Postby Sanku » 20 May 2010 18:46

chaanakya wrote:
Minor nitpicking

make Asst Secretary as Additional Secretary. There is no Asst. Secy in GOI. If any one, he would be such a minor official not to co-chair anything with DEFENCE SECRETARY.

USA or UK setup is different. There it could make sense.


You are right, an inadvertent error in the flow of writing. However I cant edit that post any more, could a Mod please help edit it?

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Re: Dance of the Flamingo_Story by Sanku

Postby Mukesh.Kumar » 24 May 2010 17:04

Dada,

Weekend over and no more installments.

Ye Liliya ka chakkar bahut gadbad hai. Every time she appears on the scene our Manav disappears for a long time. :-o

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Re: Dance of the Flamingo_Story by Sanku

Postby Mukesh.Kumar » 25 May 2010 12:28

That is an intriguing twist. Why the Finns? Is all of this a further subterfuge from the Russians? Now I won't be able to sleep properly thinking about which way the next torn is going to be in.

Eagerly awaiting next installment. Only this time I am scared that "Lily ke chakkar mein Manav fir se choo-mantar ho jayega" for a very long time. :D

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Re: Dance of the Flamingo_Story by Sanku

Postby Sanku » 25 May 2010 12:31

Err no, the puppet master behind the Finns are mentioned already! I think there there is no further twist per se... most of the twists are done...

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Re: Dance of the Flamingo_Story by Sanku

Postby Bala Vignesh » 31 May 2010 22:02

Sanku sir, enough of the sabbatical due to the death of pandeyji, may his soul rest in peace...
could we get the next post please...

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Re: Dance of the Flamingo_Story by Sanku

Postby nits » 02 Jun 2010 11:29

After Americans; we have a Paki angle... Kahani mai Twist nahi twistsssss hai... You just make the suspense and put our guessing power to new limits Sanku Sir... Enjoying every bit of it... 8)

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Re: Dance of the Flamingo_Story by Sanku

Postby Mukesh.Kumar » 03 Jun 2010 09:44

Couple of episodes back t seemed that the story was running to a rather tame and predictable end. But this.....

Extremely intrigued about Manav's past history. Why is everyone so interested.

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Re: Dance of the Flamingo_Story by Sanku

Postby Ajit.C » 09 Jun 2010 13:55

Long overdue for the next post.

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Re: Dance of the Flamingo_Story by Sanku

Postby bksahu » 09 Jun 2010 15:27

Mods,

Please issue a fatwa against sankuji and get him post again.

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Re: Dance of the Flamingo_Story by Sanku

Postby Mukesh.Kumar » 10 Jun 2010 10:00

Dada, where art thou?

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Re: Dance of the Flamingo_Story by Sanku

Postby Sanku » 10 Jun 2010 14:26

Writing, in the background, getting a critical mass of the story to restart posting. Sorry for the delay, but sometimes stories take life and speeds of their own.

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Re: Dance of the Flamingo_Story by Sanku

Postby Mukesh.Kumar » 10 Jun 2010 14:41

No problem dada. I just took a week's enforced (and extremely difficult break from BR) hoping that I would come back to at veritable feast.

Good things in life are worth waiting for. :)

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Re: Dance of the Flamingo_Story by Sanku

Postby chaanakya » 10 Jun 2010 18:29

Sanku wrote:Writing, in the background, getting a critical mass of the story to restart posting. Sorry for the delay, but sometimes stories take life and speeds of their own.


A true writer spoke.
Well said indeed.
Sanku, please take your time, but do take pity on us poor chaps, facing withdrawal symptoms.Same goes for other worthy writers.

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Re: Dance of the Flamingo_Story by Sanku

Postby madhusoodan » 14 Jun 2010 23:29

hats Off Sankuji.....Its read dope.

Story taking very interesting turn....

But please...please keep enough supply, I can't handle withdrawl symptom.

:)


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