Harry, thanks for the review and tips, my take on some of thepoints raised by you.
Harry wrote:
- Extensive Tables including table of Canberra ops. This could have possibly been extended to other a/c and events. A timeline summary of events perhaps?
I never really thought it that way, but yes that would be helpful for those in a hurry. The primary idea behind the canberra ops table was to address the fact that not much has been written about canberra missions outside the Peshawar, Badin missions. I guess we can do that for the next jumbo edition five years later
Harry wrote:
- Not relatively photo intensive, smallsize photos only
- No maps
- Detailed orbat of PAF and analysis missing.
Agree, this needs to be addressed in the second edition. Some of the photographs could have been printed in larger format. I realised that there were as many as six blank pages towards the end of the book. We could have fitted atleast eight more images and four maps if we had done it properly. But we didn't know bout it till we got the book in our hands.
Harry wrote:
- Too much emphasis on individual a/c of IAF orbat over overall capabilties which would need an individual analysis. Not too much detail of technical warmaking or (Fighter and ground based) Sensor capabilties of both sides.
The IAF Radars have always been the most sensitive issue to discuss and explore. Absolutely no photographs or details of the IAF Amritsar Radar unit exists in the Public domain untill recently. The role of Radar on the indian side in the conflict other than the Amritsar unit was neglible and I think that has been bought out in the account. Certainly the tecnical capabilities of the Pakistani Electronics should have been explored in detail further, including the Elint RB57s. But this was another task in itself and could have delayed the work.
Harry wrote:
-More details on Naval Aviation activities expected.
Didnot have much to go on this other than the Official History and Hiranandanis book. I would have loved to interview the Alize Crew - if we ever find out who they were!
Harry wrote:
- Perhaps a perspective and numbers from ex-PAF, BAF pilots such as Mohd. Shaukat?
- Day-wise summaries at the end of each.
Something to keep in mind eventually. I expect there will be some visibility to the book in Bangladesh too and hopefully we can get some PAF/BAF veterans to contribute....
Cheers
Jagan